 | love the words usage. It's so beautiful .. |
| This one is my every time fav poem.
I can't remember how many times I read this and cry during my poly times.
it's such a sad and touching poem ..
We all have passed through those hard times.
Now I look back the past, it seems like nothing. In future also, we still have
many more things to come. I believe we can make it through also . . .
easily and comfortably.
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| Arhh. this poem is cute.
hehee when I see the title, I miss Myanmar. :P |
| one more, love the background. ^.^ |
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 | wow ..impressive..i didn't know u wrote poem..it is nice
i like the words u using
"kaung kin ta khu lone ka khone loh pop..."
and " hnin tway ta hlet hlet nae...".....it is when we call in burmese"na mate pone"
poems, am i right ...i also love to write poem and read good poem..i wrote when i was in myanmar...but i dun have any heart and mood to write poem in here..it is spoilted already or not i dunno... |
| it makes me miss the winter in myanmar...i hate here cos there is no naturally cold winter...oh..Man! |
 | thx sis, and emmaaye for insightful comments
It's been more than one year I stop writing poems.
Just no inspiration yet =) |
 | oh.. what a lovely poem!! |
| this is superb..
i like this one most amongst these 5 poems.. |
| oh ya .. thx bro, i'll share it after i've created background design =) |
 | it's so touching.. it makes me cry... Miss home =(( . |
 | hi, come visit www.poemscorner.com if you have time and welcome for all poem lovers. =) |
 | Nice to meet you! I am Richard from Thailand. |
| Really nice poem and you are good poet also.Thanks for your share us. |
 | pretty darn kool ... wow... i just love it ... thx gil ... |
| thx for your comments, friends. =) |
 | mraungj wrote on Jul 29, '07, edited on Jul 29, '07 ၾကိဳက္သြားၿပီ ဗ်ာ
ေဒၚအိေရ.... |
| ေသေသခ်ာခ်ာလးဖတ္ျဖစ္တယ္။ကြက္ကြက္ကြင္းကြင္းမ်က္လုံးထဲျမင္ေယာင္လာတယ္။ေရးဖြဲ ့တတ္တဲ ့မအိကိုေက်းဇူးတင္ပါတယ္။ေနာင္လဲေရးပါဦးေနာ္။ကြ်န္ေတာ္ကေတာ့မေရးတတ္ဘူးဗ်ာ။
ေရးထားတာကိုေတာ့ခံစားတတ္တယ္။သရုပ္ခြဲၾကည္ ့ေနမိတယ္။
ေမာင္ေမာင္
ဘန္ေကာက္ျမိဳ ့ |
| ဟုတ္တယ္ေနာ္။ကဗ်ာထဲကစာသားေလး
အလိမ္ခံရတာမဆန္းပါဘူးတဲ ့ ။
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| ဒီကဗ်ာေလးကိုခဏခဏဖတ္ျဖစ္တယ္။
စိတ္ကူးေကာင္းေကာင္းနဲ ့ေရးတတ္တဲ ့မအိကိုေက်းဇူးေနာ္။ |
| i want more.. seriously..
but only if you have spare time to create the backgrounds..
;) |
 | တားမရတဲ့ မ်က္ရည္တစ္စက္ ငါ့ ခြင့္ျပဳခ်က္မရဘဲ လိမ့္ဆင္းသြားခဲ့တယ္....
ဒီဘဝ ကဗ်ာေလး ႏွစ္သက္မိပါတယ္... အိသူက တစ္ကယ့္အေရးေကာင္းပဲ... |
| ရြာျပန္ခ်င္လာၿပီဗ်ာ.... ဒီကဗ်ာဖတ္ၿပီး း) |
| ကာရန္မညီတဲ့ေလာကႀကီးေပါ့ဗ်ာ... ဒီလိုပါပဲ... ေနတတ္ဖို႔ပဲလိုပါတယ္ဆိုတဲ့ နိဂုံးေလးႀကိဳက္တယ္.. |
| တစ္ေန႕ေတာ့ေတြ႕ရမွာပါ...ကၽြန္ေတာ္လည္းေပ်ာက္ဆုံးခဲ့ဘူးပါတယ္...ရသေလာက္ ျပန္လည္တူးေဖာ္ေနဆဲ.... |
| ႀကည္ႏူးမႈရသကို အျပည့္အဝေပးစြမ္းႏုိင္တဲ့ ကဗ်ာေလးတစ္ပုဒ္ပါ.... |
| to phantommask:
hee..yep yep.. ty bro .. i'll dig some oldies from my old pc and upload them soon..
to dewaing :
thx a lot for the comments ^.^ |
| ဒီကဗ်ာေလးက အႏုပညာရွင္ရဲ့ စိတ္ကူးစိတ္သန္းနဲ႔ လက္ေတြ႔ စက္ရုပ္ဘဝ လြန္ဆြဲပြဲရဲ့ ရလာဒ္ပဲဆိုပါေတာ့... ခံစားမိပါတယ္... တစ္ပုဒ္လုံး အားရွိတယ္... တတိယအပိုဒ္ကို ေတာ့ အႀကိဳက္ဆုံးပါပဲ.... |
| sis.. really, really good..
i wanna write more comment.. but no unicode now..
may be end of this month.. |
| thx for the comments, bros. :) |
 | i like this poem..
because i know this feeling. |
 | ray83 wrote on Sep 17, '07 အခုအခ်ိန္မွာ ၿမိဳ႕တံခါးေတြကုိ ခဏတာပိတ္လုိ႕ရပါတယ္။ ဒါေပမဲ့ ေနာင္တစ္ခ်ိန္က်ရင္ ၿမိဳ႕တံခါးေတြကုိ အၿမဲတမ္းပိတ္ရမဲ့အခ်ိန္ေရာက္လာလိမ့္မယ္။ အဲဒီအခ်ိန္က်ရင္ တံခါးဖြင့္ခ်င္ရင္ေတာင္ ကုိယ့္မွာ ဖြင့္ႏိုင္မဲ့အင္အားေတြမရွိေတာ့ဘူး။ ၿမိဳ႕တံခါးႀကီး လုံး၀မပိတ္သြားခင္ ၿမိဳ႕ကေလးကုိ အလွပဆုံးေလျဖစ္သြားေအာင္ ဖန္ဆင္းလုိက္ေစခ်င္တယ္။ |
| ray83 wrote on Sep 21, '07 လြတ္လပ္မႈမရွိတဲ့ ငွက္ကေလးတစ္ေကာင္ရဲ႕ အိမ္မက္ေပါ့ေလ... |
| hee ..thx for the comment , bro.
တိတ္တိတ္ေလးတင္ထားတာ ေတြ႕တယ္ေပါ့ေလ .. :p |
| ray83 wrote on Sep 22, '07 ဟီး ေလွ်ာက္ၾကည့္ ရင္းေတြ႕သြားတာ :) ဥာဏ္တိမ္လုိ႕လား ဒါမဟုတ္ ကဗ်ာမေရးတတ္လုိ႕လား မသိဘူး၊ ဒီကဗ်ာကုိနားလည္ေအာင္ သုံးေလးငါးခါ ဖတ္ရတယ္။ |
| ray83 wrote on Sep 23, '07 ဒီလုိပဲ ေလွ်ာက္ၾကည့္ရင္းေတြ႕ သြားတာ။ ကဗ်ာကုိ ၄ခါ ၅ခါေလာက္ဖတ္မိတယ္။ ဥာဏ္တိမ္လုိ႕လားမသိဘူး အေခါက္ေခါက္အခါခါဖတ္မွပဲ နားလည္ေတာ့တယ္။ :) |
| ဟီး . .အိေရးတာ နည္းနည္း ရႈပ္သြားတယ္ ထင္တယ္ .. :p
ဒီလိုပါပဲ .. အိမ္မက္ေတြက နားလည္ရခက္ပါရဲ႕ ^.^ |
| ray83 wrote on Sep 23, '07 ကဗ်ာဆရာမ လက္စြမ္းျပထားတာကုိ နားမလည္ဘူးျဖစ္သြားတာပါ :) အိမ္မက္တင္မဟုတ္ပါဘူး။ လူေတြကလည္းနားလည္ရခက္ပါတယ္ေလ။ ကဗ်ာမွာသုံးထားတဲ့ အသုံးအႏႈံးေတြကေတာ့ ေတာ္ေတာ္ေကာင္းတယ္။ |
| wow!! sis..
ကဗ်ာေလး ေရးထားတာ .. အရမ္းလွတာပဲ.. |
| ရွင္သန္တိုးတက္ဖို႕ဆိုတာက စက္ယႏၲရားေတြပဲ လုပ္ႏိုင္တာမဟုတ္ပါဘူး ..
တစ္ခါတစ္ေလေတာ့လည္း ... ၿမိဳ႕ေလးကို .. တံခါးခဏပိတ္ၿပီး .. တိတ္တိတ္ေလး (ခဏ)ေပးေနလိုက္ပါ .. |
 | အမေရ
ကဗ်ာေတြအားလုံးကုိဖတ္သြားတယ္ဗ်ာ။ စာေရးပ်င္းတဲ့က်ေနာ္က အားလုံးကုိဒီမွာပဲေပးလုိက္ေတာ့မယ္။
ကဗ်ာအားလုံးကုိႀကိဳက္တယ္။ မ်ားမ််ားဆက္ေရးပါ။ |
| အားေပးတဲ့ အတြက္ေက်းဇူးပါ .. =) |
 | I love this one, esp the last two lines. |
| phantommask wrote on Dec 13, '07, edited on Dec 13, '07 အေပၚက ႏွစ္ပုိဒ္ဖတ္တုန္းက စိတ္ခ်မ္းေျမ႕ရေပမယ့္ ..
ေနာက္ဆံုးအပိုဒ္ေရာက္ေတာ့ .. လူက မြန္းၾကပ္ၾကပ္ေတာင္ ျဖစ္ခ်င္သြားတယ္ ...
ဖတ္ရတာ သိပ္ေကာင္းတာပဲ ... ^,^
thanks for sharing sis.. |
| ^.^ thx for sharing the comment bro.
it's nice to know how the readers feel. |
 | that's how we feel in our hearts ..
thanks for this poem. |
 | hi..
how are you friend ?
lar lal tar nor ...... |
 | U R the girl Sis!
Be proud to B a poet! |
| |
Cizium .:. Zephyr 
it makes me miss the winter in myanmar...i hate here cos there is no naturally cold winter...oh..Man! 
